Representation is how someone is presented to an audience judging someone by looking at their ound, ude and much more. Within our opening sequence the audience are introduced to two characters, Noah and Lucy, with one mystery killer...
Lucy, who is 17 is on a school geography trip to Scotland. She is Female and is white British. She lives at home with her mother, Carol and her father, Glen. Their marriage is unhealthy and they are talking about getting a divorce. Lucy is concerned that everything in her life is going wrong, therefore on the school trip, she goes off for a walk into the woods with her best friend Noah. Due to the family issues at home she felt like she couldn't talk to anyone apart from Noah. As Lucy is an only child at home, Noah is like her elder brother.
Noah who is 17 as well and who is on the school geograpgy trip with Lucy, has always felt like he has to be the brave one who looks after everyone. After his father left him and his two brothers with their mother, Noah has felt like he has to be the man of the house, that he had to look after is mother and brothers. Since Lucy is having problems at home Noah also feels like he have to take her under his wing and care for her.
This post demonstrates basic planning techniques and this is because you have not considered the purpose of your chosen characters in enough detail. You have only briefly described two of your characters and you have not related to your group narrative either, which makes this very basic.
ReplyDeleteTo develop this, you need to expand and elaborate on the points that you have included, by referring all your points, back to your narrative, to demonstrate further understanding of planning. Also aim to include still images, to support the points that you have included.